The Tales of the white Cleric

[MistressOfLibria]

The Tales of the white Cleric

Death & Rebirth lie near!!!!

After her Celebration and after receiving the white Suit, Cleric Wehner was tired and went to Bed in her Quarters. She was just asleep as another, strange Version of her Love Dupont appeared in her Dream: He was now dressed into a tight Leather Dress and a long leather Cape was hanging from his Shoulders. Also his Hairstyle was shorter and he looked even more evil as he normally did when she was in his Service. With his long Sword in his right Hand he turned away from the dead Body he was just examined and she was shocked to see it was her Love lieing on the Surface of a grassed meadow next to a Forest.

Cleric Wehner knew now who this strange Figure was: She saw this Man named Lucius in a Movie which was called “Titus”. In this Movie he was one of the Sons of a great Fighter and stood loyal to his Father till the very End. This Man now faced her and began to speak to her:” Your Love is in grave Danger white Cleric, he is on the Verge of loosing his Life & the Death comes in Form of a Gun which is hold in the Hands of the Resistance Member. Run to him as fast as you can and you may be in Luck to save him!” The Dream broke up and she awaked with cold Sweat all over her Body.

She got dressed as quickly as she could and ran all the Way to his dark Office on Foot. As she came there she saw that it nearly was too late: 5 Resistance Members where in his dark Office, including Jürgen the Leader. Two of them where holding her Love in his Chair & Cleric Wehner could clearly see that it was no use for him to escape. Jürgen was holding that Type of Gun which the Figure of Lucius pointed out in her Dream and was pointing it towards Duponts Head. As the Members saw Cleric Wehner standing there clearly not as calm as Clerics normally are, Jürgen began to laugh at her:” Now see what we are going to do with your Boss & and I forgot to say with your Love. Although I can’t understand how you can possibly love such a Tyrant as him. We will rid Libria off him and so this City will get back to normal, will feel again.” With saying that Words he aimed his Gun at Dupont´s forehead and shot him twice.

After doing so they all left the dark Office laughing at Cleric Wehner and letting Dupont in his Chair in his Blood. Cleric Wehner rushed to her Love and took him with great Strength out of his Chair and onto the Floor into her Arms. She spoke with him and begged him not to die because she could not live without him. But he knew he would not make it and looked at her & said:” Forgive me Cleric Wehner that I did not knew it sooner that you loved me. I know it now but it is too late. Promise me that you will hunt them down and kill them one by one.” She only managed to nod as her Eyes were filled with Tears and she hardly could see a Thing. Then after one last Kiss from him he died and Cleric Wehner cried out heavy at her Loss. She was still holding him in her Arms praying he would come back to her, trying not to face what she knew was true.

But then she saw a Figure appear in the Room next to the big t shaped Window: Father. She did not know how it was possible as she knew Father died Years ago and that the Council elected Dupont to pursue his Tradition in his Name. Father now walked towards the two and said to Cleric Wehner:” I see your Sadness and I feel the Love you have for him. So I will bring him back to Life through your Love. You must kiss him for that and after he is back in Life you have to explain how it happened if he asks you for it. But you have to hunt down the ones who committed this Crime and you have to kill them as it always has been: in the Fires of Libria, promise me that Cleric Wehner.” She promised him that she will do everything she could to get the Revenge. Father then touched her on her left Cheek and a Flush of Energy went into her. She then kissed her Love as said and Dupont began to breathe once more. He opened his Eyes and saw Father disappear through the t shaped Window.

“What happened Cleric Wehner? I was dead, I am sure I was and now I live again, what happened?” he asked her, still in her Arms as he was too weak to stand. She put him back into his Chair and began to explain what happened to him and how he was brought back to life. After finishing the Tale Dupont was more than astonished about all that but agreed that what Father said must be done. So he took her to the great Hall of the Council and stood at the Podium with her where only the ones who speak to all the Council Members might stand:

The Hall was huge; it looked a bit like the Senate Hall in ancient Rome. The Floor was layed out with the finest white Marble and over the Bit where the Podium was was a bit of red Carpet. Also the Podium was a bit elevated so that it was clear that the one who speaks was important at this Moment.

“Members of the 3rd Council of the Tetra Grammaton,” he began his Speech,” here you see our Savior Cleric Wehner. She has brought me back from the Dead through an Emotion which she normally is not allowed to feel: Love. Her Love for me was so great that it even reached to the Heaven and Father saw it. Father came back to bestowed his Power upon her to bring me back to Life after 5 of those Resistance Members shot me at my dark Office. Further Father gave her a Message for us all: After you brought him back to Life hunt down all the Resistance Members & all Underground Members and let them burn in the Fires of Libria so that nothing will ever happen again. Now I let her speak to you as I am sure she will convince you all to take this Revenge as it was ordered from Father himself and his Word is Law!” Now she came to the Podium and her Knees where shaking a bit as she was at the high of her Carrier for speaking to the Council Members she never dreamed of this. “Honored Members of the Council, it is with greatest Respect that I am speaking to you today with this Message of our all Leader. Yes he told me to do what Vice Council Dupont told you and I will do whatever it takes to rid our beloved City of Libria from those Traitors, even if it means loosing my Life. I am only dedicated to two Persons: Father & Vice council Dupont, for my white Suit says it out to everyone out there. But I can’t do it without your Help, so I am asking you humble and with greatest Respect to help me carry out Fathers Will so that our City is free of those Traitors and lives again in the Light of Fathers Will!” A furious Applause ended her Speech and she was applied officially to carry out Fathers Will at every Cost. She could take every Man there was in the City to fight and hunt the Resistance & Underground Members and everyone knew that she would not stop till each of them was burned in the Fires.

[invisiblescientist]

The beginning of the story is good, but after Jurgen kills Dupont (who is 100 % evil) in your story, you have not given enough moral justification for hunting down the Resistance. After all, Dupont was indirectly responsible for the death of Mary O'Brian (you are not the only one who has an idol in this forum) and, therefore, at least from my perspective, he got what he deserved.

However, if you further elaborate, you can add some extra details to your story, showing that after the Resistance people come to power, they become even more tyrannical than the Tetragrammaton, and they are far more corrupt and decadent. The decadence would start with the prozium factories the Resistance takes over: Jurgen's associates convert the prozium factories to manufacture highly addictive synthetic heroin, and they enslave the people of Libria with this new merchandise (which was, on the surface, supposed to be for freedom to feel, but the motive is huge financial profits.) And because the Librians do not have any experience with emotions, once they are free, they are easily manipulated by the Resistance gangs who are ruling the city, and these Resistance gangs (friends of Jurgen) are selling cocaine, marijuana, whiskey, and prostitution, etc. The economy of Libria collapses, famine, chaos, etc., follow. After a few paragraphs illustrating the fact that the Resistance had its own agenda to take advantage of the revolution for their personal gain, then you can justify the crackdown on the Resistance.

[Aedh]

Oct 31, 2009 20:23:58 GMT -5 invisiblescientist said:

The beginning of the story is good, but after Jurgen kills Dupont (who is 100 % evil) in your story, you have not given enough moral justification for hunting down the Resistance ... After a few paragraphs illustrating the fact that the Resistance had its own agenda to take advantage of the revolution for their personal gain, then you can justify the crackdown on the Resistance.

Good points Cleric invisiblescientist. I do like your line of thought. However, recall that in the original movie Father had ordered summary executions of all sense offenders with really no reason at all given [pace] the subtext of a Sense-Offending Cleric banging around (so to speak).

[invisiblescientist]

Nov 2, 2009 12:42:21 GMT -5 Aedh said:

Oct 31, 2009 20:23:58 GMT -5 invisiblescientist said:

The beginning of the story is good, but after Jurgen kills Dupont (who is 100 % evil) in your story, you have not given enough moral justification for hunting down the Resistance ... After a few paragraphs illustrating the fact that the Resistance had its own agenda to take advantage of the revolution for their personal gain, then you can justify the crackdown on the Resistance.

Good points Cleric invisiblescientist. I do like your line of thought. However, recall that in the original movie Father had ordered summary executions of all sense offenders with really no reason at all given [pace] the subtext of a Sense-Offending Cleric banging around (so to speak).

MoL has great talent for very intense and sincere stories. In any case, all I am trying to say is that Cleric Wehner has to rise above the immoral ruling style of the latest Tetragrammaton regime. If the execution (by fire) of the entire Resistance (or all Librians who want freedom) goes on successfully, where will this end? Please note that if Cleric Wehner only blindly helps Dupont, she will ultimately become evil herself. Ultimately she must make her own independent decisions for justice.

In addition, please note that in the EQ movie, it is not the real Father, but Dupont who clandestinely took his place that ordered the summary executions of all Resistance members without trial. But we still do not know how exactly the real Father died. Was Father assassinated as part of aTetragrammaton plot?

Maybe the original Father was not too bad and, perhaps some faction of Tetragrammaton wanted a more draconian rule. Maybe MoL can elaborate further. In fact, perhaps in another version of her stories, Cleric Wehner can protect Dupont from an internal Tetragrammaton assassination plot. Maybe Dupont is really the good guy who is being coerced by the inner circle of the Tetragrammaton. Maybe the Inner Circle of Tetragrammaton is forcing Dupont to administer Prozium II instead of the old Prozium I.

For instance, remember that at the beginning of the movie, Prozium II was being advertised by the image of Father (Dupont!) Maybe Prozium I was being administered before the real Father died. Perhaps it is possible that Prozium I did not suppress the positive emotions like love and compassion, but the new Tetragrammaton government made Prozium II much more oppressive.

Anyway, in this thread, each White Cleric story is independent, and so MoL can write many dozens of different versions of each plot.

[MistressOfLibria]

Hi both,
thanks again for your suggestions I like to read them. I plan to write the next one tomorrow, realy tomorrow. And it will be a bit further into the story I begun here, later I would pick up on the suggestion about my sweety (who I believe is not realy evil) has been kind of forced to do what he does. Maybe I write about Father & Dupont working together with Cleric Wehner to bring the downfall of the now ruling tetragrammaton. And thanks for the Flowers invisible :-) did not know I was good for writing. I dont know if I should write further at my other story " Dominating Libria".

[Aedh]

Thanks. Of course I don't mean to suggest one can't take liberties with the story. No one has taken more liberties with EQ's storyline and charas than this EGIR. I mean, if you can introduce a werewolf Cleric who's the half-brother of Violet song jat Sharif from "Ultraviolet," who shows up in Libria herself, battling with a ring of villains from the Marvel comic universe, you're hardly entitled to raise a whosis about other people. In the end it's all about having fun and raising a toast to Mr Wimmer from whom our entertainment flows.

[invisiblescientist]

Agnetha,

Here is another movie with Angus Macfadyen, and perhaps this can be useful to make Dupont a good person in your other stories.

Although in the Titus movie Angus Macfadyen has the role of a relatively nasty person (as he favored human sacrifice in Titus, which led to the chain of events), I have just realized that Angus Macfadyen also had an important role in the movie Braveheart (1995). In this film, Macfadyen has the role of Robert the Bruce, who is a very good person, who later becomes the King of Scotland. Robert the Bruce is influenced by the Scottish Resistance (by Wallace) against the English rule, and at the end of the movie, with his leadership, the Scots start a revolt and gain their independence.

www.rottentomatoes.com/m/1065684-braveheart/
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Braveheart
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Robert_the_Bruce

Note that towards the middle of the film, the biological Father of Robert the Bruce betrays his people (the Scots) and sells out to England, but in the end Robert the Bruce disowns his own Father and starts this revolt against the English rule.

[MistressOfLibria]

Hi,
yes I was forced to watch this Movie some times because my Boyfriend loves it. The Fact that I dont is because I love England cause everything I ever wanted is there :-) But back to the Topic: I have seen his Role in there but he does not give me the shivers like in Equilibrium & Titus. Might be because he has a beared but I have to credit him that his Eyes are still the same wow.

[MistressOfLibria]

Here as promissed the second Part of the Story. It might not seem so informative and/or entertaining but you have in some way to do an Introduction to the Action ;-)

The Tales of the White Cleric
Prepare to fight!

After leaving the great Hall of the Tetragrammaton all knew that the 2 Offices were no longer save so they had to remain within the Building of the Government (or former Government) to plan their Revenge and to be save. Both now had a normal Quarter within this Building next to each other course the Council saw that they loved each other honestly and so they allowed it because also Father himself allowed it. Reaching her little Flat, Cleric Wehner began to think: Just hunting them down and burn them like it always was, would have been too easy. Also the Resistance knew the Pattern how the Clerics supposed to hunt Sense Offenders down so it would be over before it even begun. No she must thought out a Way which was both, dangerous and slowly, painful & entertaining. But she was confident to find it as she was feeling and so she set to her Task with a piece of Paper for making Notes.

Wilest Cleric Wehner thought out the Plan, Vice Council Dupont thought about his Love to Cleric Wehner. He never knew that someone could possibly love him and be so dedicated to him that it reaches Father in Heaven. He felt it was a pure Love and not even 1% negative. Also he knew now that she must have come all this Way only for him that she wanted to see him and that every Time he spoke with her she was shivering all over. He saw that every time he was near her and saw her Skin. All of that thinking about her wonderful Body (!) gave him Butterfly’s and he did not know how that was possible as he never felt like that before. Sure he was feeling and only the Council knew he was but he was reserved and letting nobody see behind these Walls he builded up over the many Years of leading the City of Libria like a Mayor. And now a Woman in the black Suit came along and practically said to him:” Come to me oh Leader of all, come to me with your Sorrows, with your Dreams & with your Thoughts, I understand & love you.” How can it be? How could Cleric Wehner risk her Life every Day out there only for him? And especially now that the Resistance had taken over?

Cleric Wehner in this Time was finished with her thinking about the Plan and was about to go over to him to tell what she thought would also be ok with Father. It was truly a devilish Plan she had thought out; painfully slow for the Resistance & the Underground Members but entertaining for the Council & her Love. She knocked at his Door and he let her inside. The same standard Flat as ever in Libria but it was filled with Warmth and Love she felt it right from entering it. She saw him standing at the Window and now moving towards her. He greeted her with a Kiss and asked if she had formed a Plan for hunting down the Traitors. She nodded and asked if she was allowed to tell it forward. Because after all he was still her Boss and she would never forget to show proper Respect for “Fathers Voice” even when they were now Lovers and he knew it that she would never be unprofessional at her Job.

So she began to read what she had thought out:” Only hunting them down as usual would not work oh Voice of Father, as the Resistance knows the Pattern we normally hunt down Sense Offenders. So I thought I go to their Leader with letting him and all the others think I am feeling and gain their Trust. After they trust me I will try to find out how they now rule and how Libria is now governed. When I finished doing that Part of the Plan I will return to the Hall and we can then get to hunt them down. Cause knowing your Enemy and you will win every Fight as you then know your Enemies Weakness.” With that she handed the Papers over to Vice Council Dupont and bowed respectful in front of him. She also said that for that Time she will change Clothing as that would be more normal for them and she would not attract so much unwanted Attention. It would simply be easier for her to investigate and live amongst the Librians, which supposed to be feeling now. He agreed with her Plan and said as long as Father gave his ok she was allowed to do what she wanted.

[invisiblescientist]

So you are saying that the role that Macfadyen played in the Braveheart movie was not impressive. In any case, my reason for mentioning Braveheart was that in this movie, Macfadyen is playing the role of a nice guy, as a potential source of ideas for transforming Dupont into a good person. We shall see if Cleric Wehner will one day find a way to stop the Dupont's regime from oppressing Libria.

[MistressOfLibria]

I did not say it was not impressive, please forgive me if I did in your Eyes. Everyone has his/her Idols and people which he/she finds great and I respect everyones View. It is just that I ment with Beared he does not look that dangerous as he does in the Role of Lucius or Dupont. I plan on bringing Libria back to normal, I mean with Feelings but it is still a long Way to it as I think the People of Libria are not ready yet to feel all Emotions at once. I think it must go Piece by Piece so that there is not Chaos. And maybe your a little bit right when you said about my being Fan of the Actor. A little bit I am but only without Beared :-)

[invisiblescientist]

Nov 5, 2009 4:50:33 GMT -5 MistressOfLibria said:

It is just that I ment with Beared he does not look that dangerous as he does in the Role of Lucius or Dupont.... ...And maybe your a little bit right when you said about my being Fan of the Actor. A little bit I am but only without Beared :-)

Fine. In other words, you like dangerous, tough and mean looking guys... And you might actually be correct, because nice guys finish last in this cruel world...

[Aedh]

Nov 5, 2009 22:19:30 GMT -5 invisiblescientist said:

In other words, you like dangerous, tough and mean looking guys... And you might actually be correct, because nice guys finish last in this cruel world...

Indeed ... this world belongs to those who can shout loudest, claw hardest, and fix blame on others the most readily. Everyone else gets eaten, unless they can contrive to hide away somehow.

[MistressOfLibria]

Guys guys, I am sorry but I have such a good Guy as Fiance in England and he shows me pretty well what it means to love and I do love him more then my Life. So it is not that I only like though and mean Guys. But something in Angus Eyes makes me shiver and that I like him as Lucius & Dupont is from my olden Days, from my last Job I had ;-)

[Aedh]

Nov 6, 2009 5:54:03 GMT -5 MistressOfLibria said:

Guys guys, I am sorry but I have such a good Guy as Fiance in England and he shows me pretty well what it means to love and I do love him more then my Life. So it is not that I only like though and mean Guys. But something in Angus Eyes makes me shiver and that I like him as Lucius & Dupont is from my olden Days, from my last Job I had ;-)

Well, true love can blossom here, as witness Mira and me. So don't lose hope, all you sense-offending Clerics.

[invisiblescientist]

Nov 6, 2009 5:54:03 GMT -5 MistressOfLibria said:

Guys guys, I am sorry but I have such a good Guy as Fiance in England and he shows me pretty well what it means to love and I do love him more then my Life. So it is not that I only like though and mean Guys. But something in Angus Eyes makes me shiver and that I like him as Lucius & Dupont is from my olden Days, from my last Job I had ;-)

Wonderful! I am glad to hear that. And therefore, this is one more reason for you to make sure that in your future stories, Cleric Wehner transforms Dupont into a good guy. ;D

Dealing with Dupont is a very difficult and dangerous mission for Cleric Wehner, because regardless of how charming Dupont might be, he can still be potentially as dangerous as Hitler. Thus even innocent people like Cleric Wehner who end up working with Dupont, can therefore be infected with the same thoughts and feelings.

Just imagine what kind of trap Cleric Wehner will have fallen into if she ends up choosing to love Dupont the way Eva Braun unconditionally loved Hitler without asking any questions. If Eva Braun had really loved Hitler (at a higher level), she would have either convinced him to stop his evil plans, or as an alternative, if the latter attempt did not work, she would have actually killed Hitler in his sleep in order to save Hitler's soul by preventing him from committing more crimes. Thus the love between Cleric Wehner and Dupont should not be the same rigidly unconditional love between Eva Braun and Hitler.

[MistressOfLibria]

I am thinking of some Storys at the moment so it can be expected to see some more reading in the Days to come. So watch this Space.