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Post by mawa on Apr 7, 2006 14:04:56 GMT -5
I think your style, compared to "Dark Life" has improved, which makes the story to seem much less rough than your previous one. Of course it still needs some more practice, so your writing and storytelling becomes more smooth, but there is progress.
As for the idea/plot - the Prologue, although the events are pretty vague at the moment, definitely peaked my interest and I'll be looking forward for more.
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