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Post by Witcher Wolf on Nov 28, 2005 10:19:19 GMT -5
I came up with the idea that we could discuss the book in here, rather than in the sticky...so that the flow of the text wasn't disrupted at all. So, if you have started to read this, or plan to. I'd love to hear your thoughts  |
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Post by frivolity on Nov 28, 2005 11:27:14 GMT -5
I am not 'up' on English literature, and to be perfectly honest, I don't often read fiction books (more of a knotting/braiding/hussar kinda book collector), so I can only offer a purely personal opinion.
And my opinion is; I likes this a lot. ;D
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Nov 28, 2005 11:32:57 GMT -5
*chuckles* I tend to prefer feedback on things like, characters, locations and general feelings from the chapters/book. Libby does some of the best feedback in that respect, as well as Jen. But I think they're fans of mine *G*
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Nov 30, 2005 8:11:41 GMT -5
Wyrden: Updated today 30th.
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Post by Amie on Nov 30, 2005 8:22:20 GMT -5
Wolf, I started reading this yesterday but got sidetracked. I'm up to Chapter 4 now.
For now, I'll go with Frivvy and say that I like it so far! ;D
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Nov 30, 2005 8:35:51 GMT -5
Heh. Chapter 4? Ah, Chapter 2 I love feedback, so feel free to talk about things, characters...even where you think the story might be going. Because for one of mine, this is actually a Book in size. |
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Post by Amie on Nov 30, 2005 9:02:46 GMT -5
Sorry, that's what I meant, I wasn't paying attention to the chapters.  I'm on the fourth post after the book started. ;D |
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Nov 30, 2005 11:02:41 GMT -5
That's Ok Its one of the reasons I posted up the Chapters, usually when I put up a story here I forget to Chapter it. In this case it's definitely pre-chaptered. |
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Post by mawa on Dec 4, 2005 14:58:26 GMT -5
Finally got round to reading it. I was, admittedly, wary towards "Wyrden" due to so many medicore fantasy novels with a trite "a-team-of-people-saves-the-world" plot, but enjoying so many of your other writings, I decided to give it a go. I like it. Maybe it's not my favorite among your writings, but it's still an impressive job. Now, let's be more specific: Locations & descriptions - the universe you create is appropriately dark, ravaged by wars, the one where you have to "stay sharp and hit first" in order to survive. You're doing a good job with descriptions, thus allowing the reader to imagine what's happening. Admittedly, when I sat down next to carry on with my current story, I felt kinda ashamed Characters - so far I don't really care much for Amber, but Adam surely is an intriguing character - mysterious and powerful, with ( so far ) unknown motivations driving him. As for Amber and Adam - I hope you don't intend to make them a couple *cringes*. OK, she is fascinated by him, but something rings here false - she is kinda overwhelmed by him, his personality is clearly dominant here. I can understand what fascinated her in Adam, but I don't understand what fascinated him in her. I'll be back on this one, just recording my first impression here. More later, when my impressions will be more... orderly. |
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Dec 5, 2005 7:17:48 GMT -5
All I can say is, you never know what will happen regarding my characters...sometimes even I don't  Thanks for the feedback |
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Post by mawa on Dec 14, 2005 14:43:30 GMT -5
I can't believe no-one comments this. What a shame... The plot takes an interesting direction. Well, finally the Wyrden itself was mentioned. I think I can more or less see what's coming ( I read your samples you posted in the Nethers before ) and I see the connections with your other Wyrden stories, set further in the future. Very neatly done and an enjoyable read. Waiting for more |
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Post by Libby on Dec 15, 2005 13:28:57 GMT -5
I can't believe no-one comments this. What a shame... I agree and I'm guilty here. Trouble is, thanks muchly to Wolf, I've already read this (several times) up to Chapter 13 and therefore tend not to look at the updates too much. Personally, I love all the dark arts and dark worlds and Wolf's characters are always larger than life (or death) with a few lusty heroes and heroines weilding ornate weaponry with skill and deadly precision. Complex plots interweave with intrigue and double cross and you have to have your wits about you or you'll miss something vital. But if you look at the demographics of people who come to these boards, they cover a vast range of interests and some really aren't into reading about magical worlds. It's like me...I really don't have time for things like 'The Path of Neo' or the Star Wars games. So you won't find me on those threads. I'm sure they're fantastic and maybe my children will buy them. I kind of lost interest after the Tombraider series finished. Or maybe I'm just getting old, since I used to spend hours playing Space Invaders. But back to the story. There must also be people who do enjoy reading this, but are perhaps put off by the fact that because this is a 'discussion' thread, they feel they have to make comments other than, 'Hey, this was great!' Not everyone can actually articulate why they like something... |
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Dec 15, 2005 14:28:30 GMT -5
This is the new edit of the book as well Libby. This one actually has a few things that have been altered, and at least 3 key scenes were re-written. Mostly everything in this re-edit has been changed from the original. I'm now 203 pages into the edit too Wheeeeeeee! Thanks for the feedback. I kind of opened the discussion thread so the main story was left free to flow and people could just read it at their leisure |
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Post by Amie on Dec 17, 2005 19:19:24 GMT -5
Because of the holidays I've been very behind in reading the fan fic on the boards. Today I am doing some catch-up reading, and I've read more of Chapter 2. I am thoroughly enjoying this story, Wolf! I love the mystery surrounding Adam Wolfe. And as usual your writing is excellent. ;D
Can't wait to read more on my next session!
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Dec 19, 2005 12:12:50 GMT -5
Thank you Amie. As some good news it seems I have someone definitely interested in turning this novel into a print book. He's working out the details at the moment. I will however continue to edit/post until its completed.
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Jan 3, 2006 16:32:53 GMT -5
Happy New Year!
The Wyrden thread's been updated for 03 Jan. Expect more updates soon.
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Post by Amie on Jan 13, 2006 12:08:42 GMT -5
OK, I'm reading further into the story, and *gulp* didn't expect the transformation!! Oh what mayhem!! I love it! ;D
*goes back to read some more*
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Jan 16, 2006 13:09:19 GMT -5
*grins* Thanks Amie, there is more to come...since I have edited quite a bit more than I posted.
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Post by mawa on Feb 8, 2006 12:38:49 GMT -5
Read the latest update. You were right, it answered my questions and doubts. I'll be waiting for rest without further grumbling And... do I need to repeat that I dig this story a lot? ;D Well, it won't harm Quality work as always |
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Feb 9, 2006 9:12:06 GMT -5
Thanks MaWa, reading that on this day really cheered me up a lot |
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Post by mawa on Apr 5, 2006 15:16:24 GMT -5
Read the latest update. Very interesting. I have the feeling that the Demon Army will be somehow hampered by Rhage's machinations i.e. the Demon will most likely miscalculate in certain moment. I also see Fenaric's (fairly) near end And I'm most interested in Aden - that mysterious fighther who seems to see perfectly through the Demon's plans. He'll play a bigger role here, won't he? And I wonder what does he mean by saying: "I would not dishonour the one I serve..." - I'm pretty sure he means neither Kenthya nor Fenaric. To put it more clear - it's definitely intriguing. I wonder if my theories will prove even remotely accurate. We'll see |
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Apr 5, 2006 17:20:49 GMT -5
Heh MaWa, you won't have too long to wait since the preliminary edit has been done on this one I am now completely free to just post segments of it, until I have the whole 409 pages posted A full edit will be done but not by me |
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Apr 7, 2006 12:14:55 GMT -5
Wyrden has been updated again with quite a large chunk, my plan is to pretty much add to it now until I reach the end of the document. We're about to hit Chapter 14 and I know a few people that had preliminary copies of the book might not have seen beyond C.14 or some of the re-written dialogue/scenes.
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Apr 8, 2006 7:22:10 GMT -5
Updated again today, so we're getting close to the final chapter |
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Apr 9, 2006 8:48:01 GMT -5
Another update today brings us to...Chapter 15!
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Apr 10, 2006 5:58:57 GMT -5
There's not long to go now with today's update on the 10th.
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Apr 11, 2006 6:04:29 GMT -5
And there we have it folks, the 11th brings us to the close of book one. It's hard to believe that particular post/thread contains 409 pages of book, but it does |
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Post by MisterAnderson on Apr 23, 2006 5:47:38 GMT -5
Great stuff Wolfie! Managed to finish it off finally last night (printed it out) & it was definately an entertaining read from start to finish.
Theres always plenty of wonderfully twisted ideas that seem to come forth from that mind of yours, and the interaction between your characters always generates some interesting dialogue & witty banter.
I think if I had to pick one chapter I liked the most, it would have been the 3rd. I always seem to like the bad guys the best in most stories (as they are often what drive the major events) and I loved your descriptions of Akas & the rebel Demons. Top shelf narrative!
Thumbs way up, dude!
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Post by Witcher Wolf on Apr 23, 2006 6:13:15 GMT -5
Thanks Mr. A, needed that this morning |
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