poem to be accepted

[Locke]

I dunno how this works, but here is a poem I made, and which might be good enough for the poem section you have here?

***
And there is no more rage,
not in hearts of young or old.
And there is no more laughther
nor noone weeps.

And there is no more dreams
nor no more love to behold.
And tonight is still
as justice sleeps.

And no more terror in our minds,
no more war shall break loose.
And no more fear for men,
nor grief of wasted lives.

And thus there is no relief
of peace and final truce.
And laws are all there is,
all everyone abides.

***
-Locke

[mawa]

Good stuff, Locke! Keep it up!

It'll end in the poem section for sure. But it usually takes some time.

[Xenia Onatopp- Bale]

Great poem, Locke.

[JenGe]

Very nice Locke!!

You did just fine by posting it here. I'll place it on the site's Poetry Page the next time I update it but that may not be for a few more weeks...months...whenever...

BTW, welcome...it's always awesome to get more talent!!

[Libby]

Good poem, Locke...I like the structure -the repetition and the rhyme a,b,c,d e,b,f,d...it's really effective. You should join us! ;D

[Locke]

"You did just fine by posting it here. I'll place it on the site's Poetry Page the next time I update it but that may not be for a few more weeks...months...whenever..."

thank you, I appreciate that. Honestly, I expected the poem to be ditched out at lightspeed

also, this is a bit pushing it, but a small doodle I made

That might turn into a dead link pretty soon I fear.

-Locke

[Locke]

hmm.. it ate my link...

www.xpphotoalbum.com/showphoto.php?photo=311380

[Libby]

Guest-Locke said:

thank you, I appreciate that. Honestly, I expected the poem to be ditched out at lightspeed

Hey, Locke...we're not like that here! If someone takes the trouble to show their appreciation of EQ then we support it! ;D

[JenGe]

Just FYI to Locke...your poem is now on the site...

www.freewebs.com/equilibrium-movie/equilibriumfanpoetry.htm