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Post by Mallory on Feb 10, 2004 0:43:53 GMT -5
I We were once a we A thinking entity A formation in elatiom Marching in formation With no thoughts To call our own But nothing last forever A rebellion always rises Bringing down the masses Silencing all those we's We are no longer I'm no longer we ODE TO LIBRIA Libria Oh my libria Now you are lost to me Where I once yearn to see you Now I yearn to leave You are full of sorrows Your walls run with blood You have brought the memories Of wars long past Once a safe heaven Now your are a trap A jail cell that is waiting to collapse Libria, oh my libria Gone you are to me You are a tomb with fading memories Destruction runs amock your streets Filling the nights with piercing screams Libria darling city of mine Were I once could in peace Now that peace is gone Reveries of your greatest moment Will forever be in me But I no longer can remain I am fading into dark for the bullet hit my heart Good-bye forever Libria of mine |
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Post by MAX on Feb 10, 2004 1:29:25 GMT -5
Well done Mallory! Very new and original...  |
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Post by Xenia Onatopp- Bale on Feb 10, 2004 5:12:48 GMT -5
If Father is the King Of Wallpapers, you are the queen
of poetry.
CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!You did great!!!!
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Post by BlackDragon on Feb 10, 2004 13:40:09 GMT -5
I can only say one word...... beautiful!!!
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Post by ProziumAbuser on Feb 11, 2004 21:34:54 GMT -5
AMAZING!!!!! Kicks my ass!!!!!! I love how movies inspire such talented fans like this.
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Post by Mallory on Feb 13, 2004 12:55:21 GMT -5
Thank you for all your kind words. They warm my heart. I do try my best, but we do have a lot of talented people on this board.
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Post by Xenia Onatopp- Bale on Feb 14, 2004 7:06:49 GMT -5
You warmed our hearts too and made our day, Mallory.
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Post by Mrs B. on Feb 28, 2004 5:39:35 GMT -5
Wow!!! Those poems are great!!!! Keep them coming!  |
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Post by JenGe on Feb 29, 2004 10:51:03 GMT -5
Hey Mallory, I just wanted to let you know that I finally have the two poems from this thread on the site's Poetry page...To everyone else...if I missed some please let me know!! |
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Post by Mallory on Mar 1, 2004 4:31:04 GMT -5
Thanks Jenge, I am trying to work on New Poems but I been so busy with school.
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Post by mawa on Mar 2, 2004 11:34:09 GMT -5
I am trying to work on New Poems but I been so busy with school. I'm looking forward for your new work, Mallory. I love your "Ode to Libria" - it's very moving & very emotive. I love this bit. |
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Post by Lukegr945AIM on Mar 7, 2004 21:37:43 GMT -5
Malloy the songbird
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