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Post by NateP on Jun 6, 2004 23:40:39 GMT -5
Sweet scene! So now it seems that Christine has found out about Draak....
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Post by TheMacroprosopus on Jun 7, 2004 6:09:52 GMT -5
Oh, of course. There's no way I could have all three characters without making it all come together. It was a sooner or later sort of thing. I picked the former.
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Post by NateP on Jun 18, 2004 0:48:14 GMT -5
any new ideas coming to you? What happens next?? I want to know! ;D
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Post by TheMacroprosopus on Jun 19, 2004 10:18:43 GMT -5
Haha. Yeah, I only got about another page worth. I wasn't gonna post it, cuz it isn't very much. I guess I can...Just a second...
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Post by TheMacroprosopus on Jun 19, 2004 10:23:50 GMT -5
This really isn't much, but just to keep it flowin'. Oh, hey cool. After Monday I can devote a lot more time to this. Rock on.
“Yeah, just…ow…give it a minute,” John grunted. It didn’t hurt as much as he expected. Must be the “powers”, he thought. Sure enough, a few seconds later, the smoking bullet slid from his shoulder into his hand. Christina watched in shock as the wound healed, leaving only a faint scar. “That’ll be gone tomorrow,” John said reassuringly. “There is a lot that can be told to you,” the dragon said quietly, turning to Christina. “But first, I must speak to John.” The two moved to a far corner to discuss Christina’s fate. “John, I’m not sure how to handle this situation,” Draak began. John thought, and after a moment voiced his ideas. “I don’t suppose you’re hungry? I mean, look at that. Perfection.” The beast gave John a disgusted look, which could really only be based off its eyes. “No? Okay then. I really can’t think of anything to do. Other than tell her. If she gets out, without knowing what the hell is going on, we could be screwed. I mean screwed. She’ll tell someone what she saw and assumptions will be based off that and that alone. And we can’t kill her. She’s a cop.” “I agree. Killing is out of the question. As is letting her go with what she does and does not know.” Draak was surprised at the plan John had devised in such a short time. They approached Christina, and John began with, “Hello, I’m John Crane.”
At the end of a two hour question and answer period, the three mutually thought that everyone understood what had happened and was going to happen. Christina, like John, had to disappear. But only for a while. Eventually one other person would need to be involved. Or, a new identity would need to be created. Ties to the police force of the city were imperative. Christina decided to set up a new identity for herself, using falsified documents and an old “friend” who owed her some favours. The majority of her new life would be a shell; paper only. The only thing that would be used was her job on the city police force.
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Post by NateP on Jun 20, 2004 0:27:16 GMT -5
interesting.... Continue soon! Will john also "disappear" from the system?
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Post by TheMacroprosopus on Jun 20, 2004 9:05:59 GMT -5
...I thought he did already.. He's presumed dead and has been gone for a few days. Hmm I'll have to cement that when Christina gets her job...
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Post by Baleheadnutcase on Jun 20, 2004 13:45:52 GMT -5
Well, I'l be blown away... (still disappointed you didn't use Puff.. ;D ;D) It sounds like a movie to me... Oh John already sounds like my ideal hero . Please keep writing
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Post by TheMacroprosopus on Jun 20, 2004 13:58:18 GMT -5
Haha. Yeah. Puff just didn't fit the relative darkness that I hope to bring. But, of course I'll keep writing. I'm not stopping till I'm done, or genuinely can't figure out where to go next. That's when I'll release it as a cliff-hanger and promise a sequel that will never come.... Muahahahaha...Or I'll just truly finish it.
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Post by NateP on Jun 21, 2004 10:28:58 GMT -5
...I thought he did already.. He's presumed dead and has been gone for a few days. Hmm I'll have to cement that when Christina gets her job... Ohhh.... Stupid me ;D Continue soon. What will the 3 of them do together now?
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Post by TheMacroprosopus on Jun 21, 2004 14:18:43 GMT -5
I haven't a clue. That shall come soon though.
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